Vagabond that is me.(I am visiting my son in Nashville.) I am loving your alphabet so far!! And THANK YOU for your blog love!! I will send a proper thank you after Thursday once I am home again. xo teri
Oh wow! This is strong, so strong - not one extra word, and the feelings palpable, hitting hard at a place in my own memory I prefer not to go... Well done!
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Vagabond that is me.(I am visiting my son in Nashville.) I am loving your alphabet so far!! And THANK YOU for your blog love!! I will send a proper thank you after Thursday once I am home again. xo teri
Outstanding finishing line! Love the depth of 'Hating the strengthof my need for you.'
Solid, vivid imagery, powerful depth.
mmm...i feel that need...and for many vagabonds, needing anyone, is a hard realization...we all do though on some level
Clear bold lines to your narrative poem. Nice One Shot!
There is a tale.
Nice tight write!
Oh wow! This is strong, so strong - not one extra word, and the feelings palpable, hitting hard at a place in my own memory I prefer not to go... Well done!
Great imagery! I can totally picture it and almost feel the emotion too. Love it.
There is so much said here between the lines - nicely done - thank you for sharing
ah, the push me, pull me of desire
The desire and passion of forbidden fruit
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