I was cantering in the arena -- balanced, smooth and relaxed. Three strides before the corner, Jackson bucked. Caught unaware and unprepared, I was tossed to the side of the saddle. As I scrambled back up, the next buck lifted me further off balance. I let go, pushing myself away from his shoulder and dropping to the ground. The sand was hard. It hurt. Jackson slid to a confused stop and stared at me with questioning dark eyes.
You chose the other;
The wife and children, the known.
I let you go.
I have submitted this poem to The Gooseberry Garden Poetry Picnic. Check out the other submissions.
And, thank you very much to the Poets Rally for this award!

And, thank you very much to the Poets Rally for this award!
18 comments:
Wow. You really understand the relationship between the narrative and the haiku. I'm bookmarking yours, should I need another example.
margo
Such pretty poetry, always. I ought to try my hand at writing more often. There was a time I wrote notebooks full of poetry and prose, and then something happened and I hardly dare to now. I sit, scrunched up and moist, inside this shell-house.
How happy you made me when you said you'd made the recipe!! I laughed thinking of you all licking up your plates (!), and though you say you used bread, my own husband grew up actually licking his!
You hugged my heart today. xoxo
wise choice.
well put.
this is impressive.
cheers.
Wow...
Oh wow...
This is possibly the best haiku I have ever read.
Amazing... left me breathless.
I am humbled by your words.
So glad to see how to do Margo's prompt- really lovely and wise.
I am always amazed at your blog and your poetry I so enjoy coming here to see your entries
http://gatelesspassage.com/2011/10/18/mirror-of-truth/
Awww the horse felt it had been let down. I think animals do have feelings which they can only show in certain ways.
Very nice write.
Oh, this is very nice!
I like the contrast and commonality in your story of content especially the way you wove it in prose and poetry. Really nice!
beautiful ending!
Ha! I Love this piece! and I know about being bucked off of horses...I think I hold the world's record. LOL
the structure of this piece (Haibun?) is very cool.
thanks.
neat.
Fine! It worked...
ZQ
profound Haiku.
Glad to see someone "gets" horses.Very well structured.
the shortest poems linger longer. :) greetings.
How are you today?
Happy end of November!
Appreciated your support to our poetry picnic,
Hope to see you share today,
A random poem or old poem will do the wonders too.
Your talent rocks.
Hope to see you in.
xoxox
well deserved award, wow.
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