I've been playing with a form called the Lanturne which was a prompt on Margo's blog. The form is five lines. One syllable, two syllables, three, four, then one syllable again.
uhmm, i am not sure if this is the right entry i should comment on coz the link from the poets rally directed to your blog not on your entry but anyway this fall lanturnes post is a great write. it is a well penned piece. keep up the good work! please check my entry too: http://wp.me/TDjw
Oh the change of the season and the turning of the leaves. On the islands I do miss the change of he leaves. Our plants are so tropical and grow year round and they are like a jungle in our yard but so beautiful lovely poem http://gatelesspassage.com/2011/10/05/today%e2%80%99s-feelings/
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Fun, wonderful descriptions.
These are fun!I love the different views of fall, and the play on the word fall, and love the title, Fall Lanturnes. A great play on sound.
margo
PS Makes me want to dig out some notes and turn them into lanturnes!
Autumn! The most poetic of months. Loved it!
beautiful imagery.
:)
love to see leaves fall.
Oh, you syllable-counter, you! Nice work!
My Contribution
uhmm, i am not sure if this is the right entry i should comment on coz the link from the poets rally directed to your blog not on your entry but anyway this fall lanturnes post is a great write. it is a well penned piece. keep up the good work! please check my entry too: http://wp.me/TDjw
I loved the description and the imagery which you have painted... absolutely a delight to read
Great poem. Thanks for introducing me to a new form.
Here is my entry:
http://jackedwardspoetry.blogspot.com/2011/10/everyone.html
Oh the change of the season and the turning of the leaves. On the islands I do miss the change of he leaves. Our plants are so tropical and grow year round and they are like a jungle in our yard but so beautiful lovely poem
http://gatelesspassage.com/2011/10/05/today%e2%80%99s-feelings/
Too bad summer heat can't last.
Brilliantly written :)
lovely fall images! so vividly painted in so few words...
Oh, I like that! I even like the shape!
A lot of poems about fall this week... Unfortunately, summer heat can't last. Nicely done!
true, summer's heat can't last. reminds me of robert frost (i think) "nothing gold can stay."
hurray for poetry! and poetry + horses = one of my favorite things! thank you for sharing, Corinna
p.s. happy to become a follower, so please keep your posts coming!
Love the subject and interesting form to write in.
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