This poem comes a prompt from Margo and one of her Tuesday Tryout challenges last month:
Today we are going to look at a relatively new form, the etheree. The etheree even sounds lovely doesn’t it? The form depends on a syllable count and can be easy or difficult depending. If you only worry about the syllables, the poem is easy. If you want to craft a good poem, you have to worry about line endings and making sure the end words are strong and not something like ‘a’. Then things can be a little trickier.
The poem is ten lines. The first line has one syllable, the second has two, the third has three, and on until the tenth line which has ten. Jim Wilson, whose blog on etherees I will give you a link to later, describes the process as an unfolding, which gave me the idea for my example etheree. As you read an etheree and each line increases by one syllable, the poem does give a feeling of unfolding or opening up.
Strong
Agile
and full of
bounce in her kid
goat limbs; she gathered
herself, sprung and scrambled
over the fence to freedom
to nibble on tender green weeds,
to scramble over granite boulders,
to reach the voices walking to the barn.
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12 comments:
And this is what I love about an etheree: the way it builds, each line upon the preceding until the end or punchline. You have given us a lovely vignette.
margo
Great piece! Love "kid goat limbs" - great image!
cool loved it ! like the trianglation of the presentation too .....thank you for sharing x
This is great and love your goat limbs this really stands out and makes me laugh on it but guess that is just me
http://gatelesspassage.com/2011/09/08/the-crimson-witch/#comment-584
Very interesting. It builds so nicely. Thanks for the informative style.
William
nice etheree.. from me
http://fiveloaf.wordpress.com/2011/01/30/lines/
smart build up.
lovely entry.
I loved you poem and the new poetry format you are introducing. I am going to give it a go. I love experimenting with new genres of poetry.
Very interesting and I will begin to dabble with that "style". I like the format...not to mention your "etheree"
ZQ
This is a lovely etheree and I learned what an etheree is today as well! MsQ
I like this...very nicely done and I can see your kid goat on her romp.
Interesting. Thank you for sharing.
Check out my entry: http://wp.me/s1LMFk-668
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